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She Took Her Love Away
17 June, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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you took my heart
you let it drop
you walked away
when it fell apart

you took my heart
you drained it's love
looked at me
and walked away

you took my heart
not worth much to you
you glanced one more time

to make sure
no one else saw
what you just did

you took my heart
you made it cry

you broke my heart
you turned around
then laughed at me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (70.57.142.192) -- Saturday, June 18 2005, 03:29 am

A hurt soon rememberd

Never do you forget when your heart is crushed
Terrie* (66.81.137.188) -- Saturday, June 18 2005, 05:19 am

'Aye Clive,

one just remember's to forget, a bad love..
sad isn't it? that there are such that control and create soooo much harm upon another innocent heart...thanx
Joyce Ivy (68.19.179.94) -- Sunday, June 19 2005, 06:39 am

So Sad

Terri this is a sad write...broken hearts are hard to mend...good work girl
Terrie* (66.81.131.130) -- Sunday, June 19 2005, 07:03 am

Hi Joyce

thanx, yea one of my male friends had some bad luck awhile back and well he's rollin' again i won't let him give up..friends are ther til the bitter end..
Joyce Ivy (68.19.179.94) -- Sunday, June 19 2005, 09:36 pm

Terri

friends are always good to have...love ya work...
 
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