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Look At What You've Done!!
20 June, 2005
Author: Taylor James

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A suicidal son
is whom you have raised
a son who wants to die
because he was never praised.

Look at what you've done
to this son of yours,
you made him cut himself
whilst blood pours through and past the doors.

Look at how empty he has become
just look and see why you've made this boy do glum
can you look inside and tell me the reason why,
why you raised him like this, and why he wants to die?

One day he'll go to far,
he'll try and kill himself,
from the fumes of a car.

you need to see that he cant go on
soon enough he'll exploded like a bomb.

Treat him like a human,
dont be so mean
he needs love and affection,
so he can grow up and lead a good life indeed.

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Angel in Tears (86.135.21.128) -- Tuesday, June 21 2005, 10:51 pm

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Anyone I might know?lol yes indeed!Agree with you on these words.Really good poem!
 
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