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Let Me Take You For A Walk
Author: ShyHeart

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I have traveled, wilderness trails, seen water fall, a thousand feet
Across the face of solid rock, which seemed to smile upon the valleys,
Below for over a hundred miles, all was green and wore a smile
I've seen flowers bloom, surviving a torrential rain, they smell so, sweet

I've seen the sun shine, through a thousand thunder clouds
Seen the dove fly, home to her nest and feed her young
Saw an eagle fly..., fly so high, high into the sun
Saw a forest fire, burn all that was weak, saw the strong survive

I've seen a grizzly bear, catch fish from a stream and butterflies
Hoover over flowers and hummingbirds, kissing the petals
Yes, I have walked a long way, and I have seen many things
Yet, I have never seen, anything, more beautiful, than when you smile at me

As you take my hand, and say, let's go for a walk, just you and me
I follow your smile, as I hold it in my hand, on a mountain top
I remember when, you belonged to me, and we would walk
With out a tear, I see everything we shared, but, now you fly with the eagle

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (66.81.139.206) -- Thursday, June 23 2005, 04:49 am

wakin' & walkin' w/you, a lovely walk i share

Martin Darlin', this is such a beautiful read, love it, ; )
martin vann (63.25.184.176) -- Thursday, June 23 2005, 04:33 pm

Hearts, Always Seem To Walk In The Forest

Terrie, Thank you for your heart touching mine. Seems, all hearts, walk in the forest before finding the sun-light, they search for.
Meridian (205.188.116.203) -- Thursday, June 23 2005, 04:54 pm

MV

Detailed poem! Terrific! I can envision in my mind from your text here, the birds flying, the grizzly bear moving and such... Your words are like verbs, you have so much action and depth!
Again, Terrific!
Martin Vann (63.25.184.176) -- Thursday, June 23 2005, 07:53 pm

Meridian & Terrie, Thank You.

Meridian & Terrie; Thank you for walking with me and seeing, the love I do. Most men, would not write the way I do, but, my heart wants to share its love, with everyone. Thank You Terrie and Meridian, for walking with me.
Terrie* (66.81.143.159) -- Thursday, June 23 2005, 09:31 pm

My walk with you is for Eternity

Martin Darlin',ya already know, not only do i see your heart's love, but i feel it as well...lovin' hearts need only an " I L U" not a "T Y" yet continue to share it's love w/everyone as we do, w/o feelin' embarrased.
barb (209.112.24.86) -- Friday, June 24 2005, 03:24 pm

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very pretty writing. thanks for the visualization.
 
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