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Solemn Thought
Author: Oyeleye Damilola

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My eyes hurt
My soul aches
my spirit shut
my soul gate
my moon is dark
stained with blood
my world is empty
and Life is Cruel
burning Love's fuel
the rope is friendly
the blade will guide
both may send me to
the other side.

------- Author's Notes -------

The poem is a didactic poem and moody of course,it was a personal experience that almost made the Author to commit suicide,This poem is a deep expression of grief,it shows how life can be so cruel and disastrous.
The use of simple Languages was employed and irony was also given a placeat the tail-end of the poem

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prince o. (192.168.1.44) -- Wednesday, May 28 2008, 12:22 pm

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i must say that this poem is really seetheing of thoughts that are provoking.
 
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