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Who's To Say?
Author: WilTheThrill

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Whos to say,
She cant create a feeling,
That you cant forget,
What if she is the one,
That I will be,
In love even if its temporary,
Til she finds the flaws of me,

Shes the reason that I say,
I need a substance in my life today,
Goofy and yet, filled with pride,
She dont need no where to hide,

Shes got the,
Greatest smile,
I want to be,
The one who stands beside her,
Defending,
Id give her anything,

Im determined,
To let her see,
That I could be,
The one she needs today,
To help her,
Or whatever shed prefer,

To be honest,
She could stab me in the chest,
In my last gasping breath,
No matter how bad it hurt,
Id apologize for bleeding on her shirt.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (69.19.146.219) -- Sunday, June 26 2005, 09:46 pm

your someone to be proud of and to Love

Wil,WOW! your absolutely Amazin', this is such s touchin' piece,in all you do i know you would give her anything..lovely heart piece.thanx for a touch and taste of your heart.
 
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