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My Response To You
27 June, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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a response to
your poem
"This Is What I Say"

i love you too Mmmmy Love
in a special way
as i have never loved before
and someone special you are
truely indeed

i heard your heart speakin' softly to mine
i know many numerous times
i do not understand
and act out

by wantin' things to hurry along
not very patient have i been
but yet, you continue to Love me

i'm glad i read what you felt
it made more sense
when i read your heart

that doesn't mean that i do not feel it
i feel it's warmth everyday
when you share of your love
for all to feel

makes me feel lucky that
i have someone wise and special in my life
that cain love me and still share

that's why i leave you enough slack to share
i have the deeper touch of your love
that i know is for our 3 kids and me
i know you will come back
and share more love with me

------- Author's Notes -------

Ditto on my love to you!!

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