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The Lord Of The Dance
5 July, 2005
Author: Ing Twi Demalah

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I have seen those tears before
Same eyes, yet a different face
All light seems to have faded
A smile vanished without a trace
A heart less willing to take a chance
Come with me and learn my love
For I am the lord of the dance

Has the joy of living so left you
That all your countenance is grey
Wounded by judgmental words
The hurtful things that people say
Now I am here my love, not by fate or circumstance
There are only two that matter my love, you
And the lord of the dance

I’ll take away the pain my love
I’ll make your dreams come true
For there is only you and I in this waltz
All grey skies now are blue
I will give to you faith once more in romance
Every night like champagne and candle light
Because I am the lord of the dance

------- Author's Notes -------

This poem was a "stream of thought" poem so it almost wrote itself.I am not sure myself what i was going for, except that often times life seems like a performance and we have to win the crowd for acceptance. But for the one we love we need only be ourselves.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (69.19.206.178) -- Tuesday, July 5 2005, 12:14 am

Your words sway me away...so lovely!!!

Ing, this was soooo beautiful!!! it had me in tears,absolutely beautiful..(wipin' one last tear away) thanx for sharin' i appreciate the thoughts your heart shares...
Angel in Tears (81.159.221.145) -- Tuesday, July 5 2005, 12:50 pm

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Ing this is wonderful!The 'stream of thoughts' tend to be the best pieces of work.
Ing Twi Demalah (159.105.102.42) -- Tuesday, July 5 2005, 11:15 pm

Same heart.....

With every poem i write Teri it seems you are the one who feels and understand most what i am trying to say...I appreciate that more than you know....perhaps we have similar hearts... :-)
Ing Twi Demalah (159.105.102.42) -- Tuesday, July 5 2005, 11:41 pm

Angel...

Thank you Angel, I am glad that others can find enjoyment in my poems
barb (216.123.57.3) -- Wednesday, July 6 2005, 04:05 am

great

nothing to add, just that angels right the best writings are the ones that tell how we truly feel about life, people and things. good writing thanks.
Meridian (64.12.116.197) -- Wednesday, July 6 2005, 03:09 pm

refreshing read

This woman sure is blessed to have a man like you. Darn, I wish I was her. LOL! Absolutely divine Ing Twi Demalah!
 
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