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My Saviour
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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When I'm feeling down,
You come around.

When I feel fear,
You are near.

When I need to share,
You show you care.

We parted because of immaturity.
Now we both see our sincerity.

How we both are there for each other,
Without being made to feel like a bother.

Losing each other to immaturity,
So nice to know we both still have FEELINGS.

They say your first love is the strongest,
Ours certainly has lasted for years.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

capricorn (82.36.135.205) -- Wednesday, July 6 2005, 02:12 pm

beautiful!

Barb this is a lovely tribute to the one you love. It's brought tears to me. It's a true love story -- mature love. Beautiful!
Meridian (64.12.116.197) -- Wednesday, July 6 2005, 02:17 pm

that bond

Wonderful to still have that bond and that connection! Your first love....This was a real sweet write, and I'm glad to read that you've both kept that fire burning and remained happy all those years! Lovely Barb!
barb (216.191.83.36) -- Wednesday, July 6 2005, 04:33 pm

thanks

You know its strange My thoughts as a kid were considered silly now my thoughts some like see what comes with age. lol Glad you liked my thoughts.
Terrie* (66.81.142.238) -- Thursday, July 7 2005, 04:41 am

Barb ( Sniff..Sniff..)

Doll this is a sweet and sincere write, one definently doesn't lose sight of their first love, your thoughts are always pleasantly sweet and honest as love should be..I am soooooo Happy for you Dear..you deserve Happiness..
 
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