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Farewell
Author: Angel In Tears

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The path of our journey together is splitting separate ways,
From here on,
We go in the opposites directions.
You go south,
I go north.
You go west,
And I, go east once more.

The two opposites who met on that faithful day,
Are repelling each other,
Like two magnets who won’t stick,
Negative and negative,
As positive and positive resist.

We were a negative n positive sometime ago,
But today,
We have become to similar in all kinds of ways.

Too attached I got, so farewell
Is hard to say,
You are too dear and you are too far away,
So I write this down instead.
I wish you all the best,
And hope we meet one day again

------- Author's Notes -------

I don't wish to dedicate to anyone in particular this piece, just thoughts that were in my head for a while, so I got them all down. I know this will get a few frowns, but please don't take this to heart. I do hope to see everyone when I come back... but this is just kinda “what if?” sorta thing.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.100.197) -- Thursday, July 7 2005, 07:30 pm

Mathematics

Sounds like Math when you say 'positive and negative'. Where are you going so soon A.I.T? We can't have somebody else leaving this site, it'll be too much to bear. Post another one soon girl! We need you up here!
Britney (70.97.74.245) -- Friday, July 8 2005, 01:36 am

hey hey

Loved it! keep on writing.... it was cool making some parts seem like math. always jot down what u feel even if there not true!
Angel in Tears (81.151.144.111) -- Friday, July 8 2005, 07:33 pm

Meri

Thanks girl!I'm not leaving this site so soon.Well not planning to do that.And anyway,I doubt that you could get rid of me that easly,lol School life has finished for me,and deep inside I do feel,that not all friendships will be lasting any more.Yet I say,"Never say never" Well only in that quote your aloud to say never. Thanks Meri for your commments
Angel in Tears (81.151.144.111) -- Friday, July 8 2005, 07:36 pm

Brit

Glad you liked this poem!It's always lovely to find a comment,saying the reader liked the piece of writing which I wrote.I do tend to jot down my thoughts often,it's just sometimes they don't get all posted on this site,as I feel they won't make any sence,and some are better left unread.Thank you for your comment
 
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