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Concrete Soul
8 July, 2005
Author: Karri

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I sink even in the shallowest waters
I am cold even on the warmest of days
I show no emotion on the happiest and the saddest of days
I am frozen stiff so people can admire me
but nobody knows that I'm falling apart on the inside
alone I sit here day after day
through fire, water,ice and snow
with heaven above and hell below
trying to hold on
but my concrete soul
is drowning me in my own misery and pain
I'm trapped in my concrete soul
I will never be set free
I will sit here til i fall to pieces
and I will become nothing more then dust
blowing in the wind
and there will be nothing left of my
concrete soul

------- Author's Notes -------

i know that i havent submitted any new poems in awhile,i have been really busy,and i finally had time to put together another poem. i hope you all enjoy it.

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Rocky (64.118.123.109) -- Thursday, April 6 2006, 01:56 am

Well Put

its nice to know in your loneliest hour that your not alone
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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