Unfinished Thoughts
11 July, 2005
Author: SouthPaw
I look out at a blackened sky
The darkness of the night
A slight orange glow is rising
The day is dawning right
I look back upon all my mistakes
The things that could have been done right
As I look upon what happened
Downright grief fills me despite
Despite the truth
It was not my fault,
But watching a person die like that
Is more powerful than its mold
A life was lost
And sadness gained,
But because of a few beers
It is such a shame.
------- Author's Notes -------
Drunk driving happens to often to ignore it godspeed to those who abuse it |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Lotus (24.30.122.61) -- Sunday, August 28 2005, 07:20 am great concept, great begining, just work on the ending |
| scurrd (71.104.244.241) -- Wednesday, August 31 2005, 05:54 am hey man you.ve gotten so much better at ur writing than when we first began writin all of us improved manespecially you KEEP WRITING DONT STOP!! |
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