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Heaven And Hell
Author: Coma

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Have you ever wondered,
what happens when you die.
Is there a place up in the sky?

Do you just lay in a coffin in the ground,
or is the a place like heaven or hell.

Sometimes I wonder if theres a place,
with just white clouds and no disgrace,
or is it just made up,
to ease or pain.
That when we die, its over
its just that vain.

I really hope theres a place like heaven for me,
So when I go I can watch over my family.

But if theres a heaven there must be a hell,
a place of devils and fire
isnt that swell.

But whatever the case,
I really don't care,
I don't want to find that answer out,
for about another 90 years.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (68.74.113.218) -- Saturday, February 1 2003, 06:36 am


contradiction to the other poem. i like this one better. the rythiming and all .. lovely chose of words..
Nicole (69.3.125.143) -- Saturday, February 1 2003, 05:43 pm

Like it

I like your poem a lot. I think of that question a lot to. I dont know how people know for sure there is one, and how people know for sure there isnt. confusing.
P.A.W (64.229.246.210) -- Monday, April 7 2003, 09:24 pm

Good

like ur poem.
Carlos (165.161.3.13) -- Thursday, September 11 2003, 06:45 pm

good stuff

i really like uh...the poem! It's really fine but I think the words are reallyb hard!!
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shea (68.32.186.89) -- Saturday, January 3 2004, 03:36 am

me too

i can relate alot to the words, almost like i wrote it myself, im glad to no im not the only one who feels that way. i too wonder if we just lay under ground. i hope too there is a place where we can watch and be with our family forever in peace
* (68.32.186.89) -- Saturday, January 3 2004, 03:37 am

from the poem above

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