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Is It Ok?
Author: WilTheThrill

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I want to hold you're hand,
all the way home,
let's take the long way round,
and let our affection be shown,
I'm there through thick and thin,
I'll wipe your tears,
I won't leave you now,
I never have through these years,
We're even closer now,
Is it ok,
If I kiss you right now,
I don't know what to say,
I understand you're not going to give it all away,
and I never asked you to,
I don't care about that,
I just want to be with you,
These are my thoughts,
When you ignore me all the time,
Your polite smile and friendly coversations,
I just want to call you mine,
You've had some trouble,
With guys in the past,
I'm not like them,
and I want to ask
Is it ok,
If I kiss you right now,
Even if I dont know what to say,
They always tell us,
Actions speak louder than words,
I could act so loud,
I could show you my world,
We could be the ones who,
Everyone says I wish I could be like that,
So caught up in love,
But instead I'm only the one you laugh at,
I know that,
You remember the last guy,
I'll be the shoulder to cry on,
You'll see I care and then I'll ask,
Is it ok,
If I kiss you now?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Charmaine (220.255.213.72) -- Thursday, July 14 2005, 03:34 pm

Sweetness.

This was such a nice poem! I loved it =)
Willahh (150.176.189.254) -- Sunday, July 17 2005, 05:47 pm

Please do!

Such a gentleman. Makes me swoon. Silly is the girl who answers, "No."
SCSnicoleSCS (70.109.103.12) -- Monday, July 18 2005, 12:24 am

wow

You really have a good way of putting words. I have a couple poems on here that could give you advice so check them out. Good JOB!!!
 
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