New Steps
Author: Luc


I know these fake flowers;
Can not undo whatís been done,
And I know they can not say sorry,
For all the things I did wrong,
Please donít take them as an apology,
But only as a gift,
Like when we first started out,
And I laughed like a dimwit,

Let this be the first step,
To something new,
A contract of a promise,
To really improve,
Tomorrow is on the horizon,
Please donít worry,
Whatís done is done,
Thereís no going back,

Take these roses
As a token of friendship,
Each one hard earned,
A link that will last,
The thorns will ensure,
That theyíll never be striped,
No sympathy please,
The past is the past,

Take this as an engagement,
To continue to move forward,
A personal gift,
Like the first gift given,
No riddles, no questions,
Just something straightforward,
Just like taking a bite
Out of the fruit thatís forbidden.

------- Author's Notes -------

Given to girlfriend with a portrait of roses in a vase.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney ( -- Friday, July 15 2005, 06:19 am

I liked..

this poem rly good. Cute in a way. keep it up
Meridian ( -- Friday, July 15 2005, 03:27 pm


Starting anew is always the way to go. After seeing that the first times were a little rocky and shaky, you're willing to put the past behind you and start over; this time, differently! I feel you on this poem! Very good Luc!
anonymous ( -- Saturday, July 16 2005, 07:14 am

long time no hear

....glad to see you back...nice poem Luc
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