Autumn Walk, In Leaves Of Gold by ShyHeart

I see the moon-light as I walk with you
See the star-light as bright as your eyes
When you looked at me, now the moon-light
Is all that walks with me, the sun-rise has set

The autumn leaves accompany me as I walk
In the moon-light, Suddenly I feel a warm breeze
Touch my soul, I know where the warmth comes from
As I walk in the moon-light on an Autumn night

Every leaf that flys by is another memory of you, so many
Each one is a part of my heart, I see the river flow
Beneath, this Autumn's moon-light glow and see you wink
From the stars so high yet, low enough to touch my soul

Yes our daughter is doing fine, soon she will be in second grade
And yes, she still asks about you, as if, you have spoken to her
I think you let her ask, just your way, no, I'll never forget
How I loved and still love you, since you went away

Yes, I'm doing fine, just miss you, as autumn leaves fly
Got some dust in my eyes, sorry darling, no, I do not cry
I am a heart, strong still in love with you, leaves get in my eyes
I know you understand, I love the Autumn moon, no, I'm not cold

barb (216.191.83.219) -- Monday, July 18 2005, 02:22 am

nice
You do express yourself so clearly. nice read

Princess Moon (168.53.174.168) -- Thursday, July 21 2005, 11:57 pm

Beautifully Awesome!
Man Martin, this poem was so lovely. The details, the softness, the tenderness, the sadness, and the love-they all go wonderfully together in this latest piece. Awesome work Martin!

Sweetvenom (192.168.48.139) -- Friday, July 22 2005, 12:36 pm

Well Carved!
Martin, Beautifully described. Only in the later part of the 3rd para you express partly and in the 4th para explicitly. You have brought your feelings are well in these lines. Both your love and the natural scenic took me to an imaginary world with the Autumn background. Lovely.

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