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Unsure
Author: Confused

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You care for him
He says he cares for you
But deep down inside
You're not sure what to do.
Should you say I love you
If your not sure his love is real?
Your head spins round and round
you're not sure what to feel.
He puts his arms around you.
He holds you so tight,
but deep down inside
nothing feels just right.
He tells you he wants you forever
but you know forever wont last.
You'll stay with him as long as you can
Until he is just a part of your past

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Maggie (63.155.196.66) -- Saturday, December 18 2004, 02:22 pm

That was an awesome poem!!

I love your poem! Thats how I feel about my boyfriend. This poem has changed about how i feel about my boyfriend.
J Freedom Long (141.154.80.119) -- Saturday, December 18 2004, 03:32 pm

Love is an enigma

Hi Confused....thanks for a great poem that says so much....and we learn that if the lover doesn't put a love song in our heart, one both can hear and feel...., there is something missing....like love, thanks for stirring up those thoughts..and thanks for your words that aren't "confused" at all...nice poem...Jerry
 
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