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Goodbye With A Tear
Author: Britney

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I seem to be missing you
more than you can think,
I'm missing your presents
and hard to smile knowing
your not the one making
my smile complete.

I swear by thinking about
you so much my mind is
gonna explode. My heart
is at a ache growing so cold.

I'm wating for you to hold
me and say it's ok but it's
not. That would just be a
dream because it wouldn't
be the way for a while as it
seems.

We said our goodbyes
went our own way I guess
that's the way it was suppose
to be to our dismay.

If you come back I may say
no because it was your
mistake not mine. Sorry if
I seem i'm being to harsh
baby but i'm just telling
u the facts.

Yeah we still talk like everyday
we stood true by sayin we were
still gonna be the best of friends
sad what love can do we almost
were put to a painful end.

The days still go on and we
probably will go our own
seperate ways in life this
is just our reality.

I cried my tears I said goodbye
this is the way I knew it was
gonna end but I still wasn't prepared
sad to say.

Now I look at you as you look at me
my final words are
" I don't think we were destined to be
I love you but I really have to say goodbye"

I walk away from you i'm actually
on my own the I feel the tear rolling
down my cheeks the tears finally
hit the floor...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.203) -- Saturday, July 23 2005, 01:52 am

I like the way

Brit! Chickadee! Cool poem! I mean like, super cool! I like the way you rhyme in a sentence with the periods and all. Brit the rapper! Once again, great words!
Britney (67.136.103.236) -- Saturday, July 23 2005, 03:32 am

hey

thanks! u inspire me alot. im glad u thought this was a cool poem! ilike my ryhmes too lol. yeah me a rapper kinda funny! thanks!
 
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