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You Took It And Left
Author: SCSnicoleSCS

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I'm not the type of girl who thinks highly of herself
actually i've done some bad things, i screwed up my health
but someone you made it better when you said it's alright
and i told myself to give in cause i wouldn't win the fight
You seemed so different not like the other guys
but later on i found out it was all a bunch of lies
that night that I went over I gave myself to you
only because I thought you were to good to be true
You told me not to worry that everything would be okay
you said through thick and thin through every stormy day
I knew you had been through a lot maybe that warped my brain
but where are you today when it starts to rain
oh I know where you are, you're with that stupid slut
the one who used to be my best friend, good luck when she wants it in the butt
She gets kicks out of telling me that you two had sex
don't come crawling back to me when she turns around and says next
you see she doesn't stick with men she's had more that nine
but she's only 17 why'd she mess with mine
you were all I had and now i'm left to cry
hoping that when you go to the reserves that you don't die
I want that chance with you yet i don't think i can
because my thoughts have changed i thought you were a real man
so now you tell me you're confused and you don't know what you want
but it's obviously not me if you take every girl that goes by and flaunts
see now this poems sounds dumb i'm just running my lips
but if you know how i feel can you please send me some tips
I guess this situation is one of the ones I can't win
I lost my best friend and my boyfriend Lord forgive me for this sin
the tears i cry tonight won't matter in the morning
but next time you do this give the girl some sort of a warning

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Cassie (68.113.161.39) -- Wednesday, August 3 2005, 02:34 am

its not your fault

its not your fault that he picked you, to hurt. even though the pain you feel now is the same pain you feel when your married. it wont be as bad. because then you will have someone that really cares and loves you. its not your fault....you arent alone
 
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