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My Life
3 August, 2005
Author: SCSnicoleSCS

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my life is very simple you see
i have some friends and a family
i go to school and learn new stuff
but my life is also rough
i'm a teenage girl going through hell
most people don't care, i can tell
but my problems aren't the same as yours
my wounds are a lot deeper than your sores
for a 16 year old i know the lessons of living
it's not what you get it's how much you're giving
but i have givin everything i can
right to the point of a certain man
i have nothing else i can call my own
for such a young age i'm pretty well grown
but i'm sticking through it i've made it thus far
my only wish is that i had a car
i'm not dependent i can do it myself
unless it invovles my very bad health
i want you to know that sometimes i preach
but its only my hopes you will learn what i teach
so hold on and i'm begging you
cause the only way i can fall, is if you fall too

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Cassie (68.113.161.39) -- Wednesday, August 3 2005, 09:15 pm

falling faster than ever before

you know you have people you can depend on.not just me either,i wont fall with you, because i cant. i am already at the bottum waiting to catch you, im standing on a trampoline. just waiting.....waiting for the moment when we both will bounce back to reality. so until then i will hear your cries and shout to you from the bottum of this dark, dark cliff. who knows if you can hear me. but i am here....WAITING
Jason AKA Daytona (64.193.0.46) -- Saturday, February 25 2006, 06:59 am

WOW

WOW you def need to keep this stuff up.. not only does it help u vent but you are good at it..
 
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