Can You Hear Me?
Author: Christian V


Hear them scream, see them die
choking on their blood, there is no goodbye.
the look of fear lies upon their face,
through their fear, i get the lovely taste..
of death.

The old and the young, as their body goes numb
slowly i kill one by one.
Why dont you see my pain within,
gone so deep under my skin.
leave me alone, you dont understand,
falling in my own pit of quicksand.

Their pain is my pleasure
the smell of death that reaches no measure.
what must i do, for you to hear
how many must die till i'm clear.

i'll drown them in water, give them pain they never knew,
choking and thrashing, they'll slowly turn blue...
can you hear me yet? how much more must i go?
all the dead bodies turn pale like snow.

still no one can hear, while more death comes near
over and over again, i shall finish where i once began.
hitting the bottom of darkness, there's no goodbye,
my soul is gone, and now i die.

------- Author's Notes -------

A man cant go on forever in lonliness. He slowly kills himself till there's nothing left inside of him to kill.It's dissapointing when someone can do this to themselves and nobody even notices...


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