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Him
Author: Crimson Angel

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He follows me the distance
He waits for me to appear
He lingers within the shadows
My guardian, he is to hear

I savor his appearance
He whispers in my ear
Soft words of true protection
As my arms tend to keep him near

Forgetting all around me
I seem to drift into a world all my own
Within his gentle and caring embrace
All I need is him, my home

One day, betrayal was at hand
Trust seemed worn down to a string
Our last words spoke of bitter hate
And I left, throwing down the ring

Simply a week later
One couldn’t guess
I got a call from a friend
About his funeral none the less

Silence consumes any voice
Needed to speak any of new
But no matter what have been spoken
I did love my protector, true

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Mandy14 (209.175.72.252) -- Tuesday, January 27 2004, 08:14 pm

Wow!!!!!

I'm so amazed that a girl I know can write anything like this. Wow!!! I'm so happy that you are my friend. It was beautiful! I could never write anything like that. Gotta go! Bye Bye.
Crimson Angel (209.175.72.252) -- Tuesday, January 27 2004, 08:16 pm

Author's Comment

Considering the fact you're sitting right next to me on a different computer.. oO; Thankyew! Woo! I gots compliments! =) *hugs all*
Mandy14 (209.175.72.252) -- Tuesday, January 27 2004, 08:16 pm

Wow!!!!!

I'm so amazed that a girl I know can write anything like this. Wow!!! I'm so happy that you are my friend. It was beautiful! I could never write anything like that. Gotta go! Bye Bye.
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Wednesday, March 10 2004, 11:20 pm

so sad

i really love ur work..but this poem hit me hard...its so real...like it happens everyday in this world...i really love it tho-heaven
Crimson Angel (209.175.72.252) -- Thursday, March 11 2004, 07:19 pm

Author's Comment

Thank you. =) I'm glad you like it. In a way, the poem was deticated to both me and a friend, for the exact same situation happened to the both of us, just as in this poem. I'm happy that people are enlightened by the poem and I enjoyed reading your comment.
 
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