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Anticipation Kills
Author: Angel In Tears

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I know you arenít gana write for two weeks,
So I sit tight and wait for the kill.

Two weeks

You didnít write today.
Maybe your busy. Tomorrow?

Two weeks, 1 day

Iím still here, you know?

Two weeks, 2 days

Did you forget?
Did you go out?
Did you know that I wrote?
Check your mail, bro.
Find the letter which I wrote.
You will find a photo enclosed of me.
It was taken this summer.
Do I look anything like you?

Oh, god! Will you write tomorrow, then?
I get my results. But you already should know. I mentioned that,
And that I miss you more than dad.

Please replay.
I wouldnít even care if I didnít achieve.
Just want to read your words,
So please write back.
I told you that I will and still am glued to the chair,
And staring at the screen,
Checking my mail like a mad-man!

This anticipation kills!

------- Author's Notes -------

I still wait...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.100.197) -- Thursday, August 25 2005, 02:48 pm

Comedienne

Hey girl! What's happening? You had me dying over here with laughter from the line, "Check your mail, bro." That's right bro, check it! Hahahaha.... The title of your poems says it all. We start to get impatient when we wait a little TOO long....you know what I'm saying? Then you start wondering, if they forgot to e-mail, just don't have the time, or said they would knowing darn well they won't. Hurrah and Hooray on this poem! Angel, good luck with the response....if it ever comes....
Taylor James (81.134.33.35) -- Thursday, August 25 2005, 06:31 pm

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well you know my thought on this hun,jus give him time and forget about it and when you least expect it he'll write,and girl you know my words are true.so dnt deny!!
Angel in Tears (86.135.200.96) -- Saturday, August 27 2005, 09:58 am

Hey guys!

Hey Meri! Thanks for your warm comment. And yes I finally got the reply which I waited for almost 3 weeks! That drived me right up the wall, but I got it and thats all the matter! You know, I even lost my patience at one point, that I stared to check my mail box every half hour!!! Thats how eager I was!LOL! Thanks again girl! Taylor,yes I do know what you think, and yet again you were right! I woke up, checked mail just for the sake of reading my horoscopes, and found the letter! Well, it has made my day! Thanks Tay!
 
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