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Author: Scurrd

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got a relaxed feelin comin over me
like a calm before the storm
but nothing bads happening
and i'm jus here
wondering
uselessly feeling
like it's something different
but again
i know better than that

so what do you say to this
is there something i might have missed
giving you tha illusion that i'm deep
realli i jus say wat comes to me

been awhile since i cared to write
it use to be all that was on my mind
but lately i dont feel as fine
bad reason to write i know
white crow said so
o well
i leave this at that

------- Author's Notes -------

been awhile since i posted anything or realli put time into my writing

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Comments on this poem/writing:

White Crow/ Lotus (24.30.122.61) -- Thursday, September 1 2005, 11:20 pm

gettin there

i can tell your writing in a rock style but its not bad only problem you dont rhyme first verse second an third you do but good job keep it up
Britney (67.136.113.123) -- Sunday, September 11 2005, 02:35 pm

hey hey hey!

great job! thanks for commenting on my poem! keep it up ;) :)!
 
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