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Goodbye
Author: Mike

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You're my smile, I'm your fear.
You're my laughter, I'm your tear.
You're my summer, I'm your fall.
You're my rosebud, I'm your thorn.

You bring me joy, I give you pain.
You show me life, I drive you insane.
Now you're gone, you're not coming back.
I hurt you bad, I have that knack.

------- Author's Notes -------

This wasn't to a 'special' person in my life, as in partner or something. I just feel I hurt everyone and anyone I come across, no matter how I feel about them. Curses, anyone?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Emma (86.1.48.222) -- Saturday, September 3 2005, 10:05 pm

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I don't know how you can hurt anyone, I've never experienced it. Aren't the people you really care about, still with you?
scurrd (71.104.124.113) -- Thursday, September 29 2005, 02:09 am

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wow pretty friggin sweet good poem man
Tammy (66.38.6.42) -- Thursday, September 29 2005, 06:49 pm

Mike

This is a great poem, I enjoyed the read, and understand what your saying. I feel I do the same thing all the time.
Mike (82.35.78.155) -- Saturday, October 8 2005, 10:56 pm

Heh, thanks..

x] Thanks for the comments. And Emma, the people I care about are still with me, yes.. They're drifting away slowly, though..
BRian (199.44.82.45) -- Wednesday, October 24 2007, 02:06 am

Mike

This poem really stickes out... i love it keep up the good work
 
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