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Author: Marilyn A F Longfellow


Rain Rain come and stay.
Wash the pain and hurt away.
Thunder Thunder please play on.
Awake the world to what is wrong.
Lightning Lightning light our way.
Help us make a better day.

------- Author's Notes -------

Dedicated to the victims of Hurricane Katrina 05'


Comments on this poem/writing:

pierce ( -- Sunday, September 4 2005, 02:34 am

let it pour

hey...i love this poem. i think we should show our love and compassion for those victoms as you did in this if the rain,thunder,and lightning....will allow the rest to wake up to what is going on in the rest of our country...i say.....let it pour.
Terrie* ( -- Sunday, September 4 2005, 02:58 am

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Marilyn,this is such an excellent write, i embrace your words as i do the victims and the survivors of this horrendous nightmare,as well as all the many souls that are committin' their time and donatin' other means of support. thank you for your words...they blend in every heart unknown.
darlene gheen ( -- Tuesday, September 6 2005, 05:27 pm

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MAFLongfellow ( -- Friday, August 4 2006, 10:05 pm

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So glad you liked it. Pray for them....
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