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Ghost
Author: Britney

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Why does it feel as if I can't go on
Like I have nothing left?
Why is it I see me and it's like
no image is there?
How come I sit yet it's as if
i'm invisable nothing but a
ghost?
Why is it when I cry the tears
really don't flow?
Why is it when I try to smile
nothing forms at the mouth?
Why does it seem as if i'm trying
to stare yet I have no sight?
Why does everything seem
like it's so black white?
Why is it when my lips are moving
no words form?
Why when I walk I have no shadow
that forms?
Why when I walk past people
no one looks my way?
Oh, I forgot i'm just a ghost
forgotten by everything...

------- Author's Notes -------

just a lil something something... Britney

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meri (205.188.116.203) -- Tuesday, September 6 2005, 03:37 pm

ooo...scary

Creepy Brit! Very suspenseful! It's like a poem turned into a movie, where the people in the audience are eating pop corn, and can't wait for the next event! Great entertainment! Love your poem girl, I just love it! Good one!
Gabriel(scurrd) (71.104.133.106) -- Wednesday, September 7 2005, 04:42 am

nice

good poem i was all into it
Britney (67.136.113.123) -- Thursday, September 8 2005, 12:06 am

...

Thank you both!!!!! im glad u liked it... *smiles*!!!!
 
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