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Beneath The Lies
Author: Crimson Angel

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Beneath the lies
Holds no truth
Ageless sin
Innocent youth
Beneath the lies
Holds the sin
Expressionless fate
Lets unholiness in
Beneath the lies
Lay the tears we cry
Beneath it all
Is where happiness will die
Beneath the lies
Lay the mirage of fate
Darkness caves in
Masking our love with hate
Beneath the lies
Is where I hide
I go with the wind
And leave with the tide

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Comments on this poem/writing:

John Foster (62.254.51.227) -- Thursday, September 4 2003, 01:42 pm

very expressive

This is a very well written poem with excellent verse.
I liked this a lot.....John
Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Saturday, September 13 2003, 02:12 am

Author's Comment

Thanks very much, I haven't been on here in a while though..As a matter of fact, I haven't even been writing. Too depressed, I supposed. Heheh...Anyway, thanks, that comment brightened up my spirits, and hopefully, I'll be back to writing... x.X; Once again, thanks. :)
 
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