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Author: Crimson Angel

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Drowning within her sorrow
Laying inside her sin
Cradling her fears
And letting the torture in
Haunted in her fate
Where the runes tell no lies
Ancient scars from long ago
Is where the happiness dies
Clouds darken the sky
No mercy in the abyss
Tainted orbs of what's known as fate
Are what this creature will never miss
Secuctive with her beauty
Eyes with an essence of steel
Hatred glooming within her heart
The stray aura seemed real
As this creature strides away
No expression seen on her face
Only hope that she will someday
Take revenge for her disgrace

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (68.74.114.129) -- Monday, August 4 2003, 12:14 pm

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i liked that last line. and the way you used abab ryhming format.. nice.. good poem too..
Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Monday, August 4 2003, 09:13 pm

Author's Comment

Thanks, luc, I'm glad you like it. I kind of changed the poem around a bit, but I didn't want to put the same thing in again, so I left it the way it is. :) Thanks again!
 
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