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Dreams
Author: Crimson Angel

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Tinted within the rays of light
Shadows cast out from day to night
The world spins within its time
And from where I sit I make this rhyme
As I sit here, my paper in hand
I hope to carve my future as best as I can
As the sun peeks over the horizon
And the abyss becomes nevermore
The legend of the enchanting Sirens
Only become the sweet song of a lore...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Seizure (68.19.11.127) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 01:41 pm

better..

This one's better than the last one I read. I just like the way it flows more... again, good job
Enchantress (206.214.68.157) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 06:21 pm

BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO!!!!! (applause)

I love your poetry Crimson Angel. It's so beautiful and deep. It's so perfect to me. I speak the truth when I say I am a BIG fan of your writing. Keep writing, I'll keep reading! Great work!
Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 06:57 pm

To Crimson Angel

I really enjoyed this poem, in fact, i read it a few times. love the way it flows. I'll have to go check out some of your other writings. :) Great job!
Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 07:07 pm

Author's Comment

Wow! Thanks!! I love it that I get compliments for what I do! It makes me feel all special *gets all mushy* Hehe, anyway, thanks alot for your comments, I love them to pieces! Thanks again, and I'm glad you all enjoy my writing! :-)
Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 10:35 pm

Crimson Angel, I like......

Crimson Angel, I like this one. A human picure came to mind of you writing your dreams on paper.
Keep dreaming and writing!! Thanks for your poem!
Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Friday, August 1 2003, 04:01 am

Author's Comment

Thanks for the comment, Ben. These are my dreams, as well as fantasies. I really enjoy writing what I see, but I like it much better, when I get complimented for doing so. Thanks again! :-)
 
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