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15 September, 2005
Author: Pezo

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its a rough and rugged rigorous terrene
when you look at the world riding on the wings of a plane
souring high through the pure blue sky
im in heaven where the angels fly
its hard but you try
i can see you from a birds eye view
watching you struggle smoking and drinking
hoping to relieve all the trouble
bills to pay so your working a double on the job
but only god knows the perseverance you have
to push on be his lamb and keep calm
when the pain hurts from the blisters in your palm
please ease the pressure from my sick swollen ankles
these bad knees are killing me but why complain
beg forgiveness for the stupid things we did to sustain
my body is drained from this life im lucky to have live
ive gotten more than i gave am i worthy to be saved

------- Author's Notes -------

this is if you feel like no one knows your pain are see your troubles there is always some one in the same situation as you or even worst "so i guess we can say these are words of comfort"

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