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Midnight Lace And My Obsession
28 September, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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A romantic dream
covered in crystal chandeliers
Velvet drapes with emerald pearls
Silver satin sheets, soft leather seats
Cruisin’ the ocean

romantic candle-light music
You and I dancin'
and escapin’ into the sunset
where ever daylight meets

A midst fog curtain laid out before us
The warmth in our hearts
cuts through like sunshine on a summer day

sailin’ the waves of a rough sea
Cain be hard to beat
But not when love is our destiny
Come sail with me

no special attire is required
come as you are
love is all i wear

let's make our own stars and moon appear
as each wave helps us reach a peak

Together let’s ride them with courage
the hand of the almighty
Shall shift our sail
as he christians our boat with all of his grace
and brings us closer to where we were

Upon the boat of love called
My Obsession
In this midnight lace

So let’s just you and i dance
with nothin' between us
fuse on this night of romance

------- Author's Notes -------

we all desire a boat of love and "My Obsession" fits sooo perfectly..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

John (66.135.33.49) -- Sunday, October 2 2005, 11:28 am

Love boat

Inspiring verse from the heart Terrie. Composition and word usage excellent.
Terrie* (69.19.168.49) -- Sunday, October 2 2005, 07:00 pm

Steamy cruise...

Thank you John, we all desire praise,from the best, your comments never fail to make my heart blush and smile...
 
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