Can You See
Author: ShyHeart


I can see all the white sand from the window of my room
I can see the sea rush in, kiss every grain of sand, then
Return to the sea and become deep blue once again
I see the white sand turn to gray as the touch fades away

Can You See


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Princess Moon ( -- Monday, October 10 2005, 05:05 pm

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Just like a pearl, a treasure, simple and beautiful all at once. Awesome poem! I loved it.
martin vazn ( -- Tuesday, October 11 2005, 04:43 pm

Princess Moon, I know You Have Seen, White Sand

I know you have seen, what I saw from my window, the white sand turn to gray. How do I know this? My answer is, the sea never lies no matter how hard, we try to bury our love, in white sand that turns gray. Hey, Texas girl, thank you for walking the beach from my window, and feeling, what I feel. Could it be, we share the same window? Nice to know, my heart has a friend.
Name:                                           Remember Me

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