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Humble
29 March, 2000
Author: Crystal Love

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took you around the world
the peer of pain fatal you on a common
destruct pulling you through a coma of
long lived absents amnesia happily set
through reliving your true insanity
can't remember who you are and maybe its
better that way horoscopes deceit the goddess
to your fable mind you contrast your future to
your next door neighbor you recall living one
of those neurotic obsessions as it all comes back
to you aren't that particular person you thought you
were you realize that the pain still stays with you
and you can't change what happened in the past only
you couldn't remember for that short while but
everyone else knew who you were and your solitary life
wasn't as big as you thought and you engrave the
letters to your name on your arm looking for attention
all the stares and glares haunt you once again and
thats when you realize it all comes back to you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Marc Gagnon, Artist (12.94.1.138) -- Sunday, July 6 2003, 01:12 pm

Strong poem

Your imagery is very heavy. I hope that you are sufficiently managed as your work should be published.

From a fellow Artist
Gagnon
 
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