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Where Are You
Author: Cydnee

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Have you thought about me
Have you dreamed of me
I need to know the answer
Before the inside of me gets diseased
I've waited for you
For a long time now
Where did you go my one, my only
I have been missing you so
Answer me please
I need to know the answers
To my questions I had in mind
Why don't you answer, I don't know why
I just keep wondering in my mind
Where did you go my one, my only

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Comments on this poem/writing:

I Think... (<BR> <B>Seizure) -- Monday, June 24 2002, 05:04 pm


I think everyone has felt like that at some point. You expressed it well. Best of luck to you.
Kimberlee (64.12.105.44) -- Friday, June 28 2002, 08:40 pm

My poem ....

I noticed you commented on my poem and since I'm new at all of this I didn't know how to get back to you so I just found a poem by you. I wanted to say thanks for reading and spending time for my poem. Yes, it was a real life experience. Thanks a lot. ~Kimberlee
sarah (144.137.67.225) -- Sunday, July 28 2002, 07:36 am

potential

i like the content of the poem but think it could have been wriiten to flow more naturally, certainly potential. well done
 
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