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Emptiness
Author: Scorpio

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It's amazing how nothingness is so cold and lonely
Wandering through the hearts of those who know nothing of care
Who throw their deeds into the abyss
Never give to their own bearing, only to receive
It's so lifeless, an undying feeling
It's contagious, spreading its plague throughout minds
Believing depression its only relief
An endless cycle of unforgiven ideas
Never flying free for those of sure innocence
Forever alone

------- Author's Notes -------

Crappy title, I know. I haven't written in a while for the sake my school life is taking over and corrupting my once mature mind. Blah, I need some time away from life.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (172.154.55.93) -- Friday, October 14 2005, 12:20 am

mature mind? I still think so.

Scorp! Hey buddy! You try too hard to be better when you're already better. The title isn't crappy. Your mind is just as muture as it has ever been. Terrific poem as always. I love it!
Take it easy Scorpio!
 
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