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Faded Star
27 October, 2005
Author: Kadhir

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I can barely see you.
(Are you there?)
The light between a blink and a tear.
(To show a life inside)
I wish to reach for you.
(Are you here?)
A desire connected by hopes and dreams.
(to burn uncontrollibly)

Can you shine?
One last time.
I just want to take this light,
(that burns inside)
And find the answers that I've been searching for,
(thats been castaside)

So will you shine again
One last time.
Please will you shine.
Please!
Please!
Please!
Shine one last time.

I've asked
But there's no reply.
I've cryed
But there's no time.
I've even died
But there's no fuse to bring you back to life...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Moonstarshine (203.81.233.119) -- Thursday, October 27 2005, 04:40 pm

nice..

beautifully expressed ..the feeling of reaching out ..hoping for a glimpse from fading light...
 
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