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No More
31 October, 2005
Author: Gemma_13

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it breaks my heart
knowing were so far apart
when all i wanted was for you to love me
but you never have and never will, i had to set free

i couldn't cope with all the pain
my head was spinning i was going insane
you left me lying in a pool of doubt
but all along it was you playing about

i never did anything wrong
it was you who was a hurtful cheat for so long
you were with her right in front of my face
i just stood there and let her take my place

ialways dreamed of being your wife
i wanted to be with you my whole life
but you took me for a fool
whats up babe, is being a player cool?

i hope you realise in time to come i am the one for you
and no other girl is able to treat u the way iused to
but hunny you'll be too late
cause i'm moving on and i aint prepared to sit around and wait

im going to be strong and not shed another tear
never again will i live in un happiness and fear
I've got my dignity and i've got my pride
i will show my face because now i have no reason to hide

my heart will mend one way or another
i will find someone better a new lover
you wil be alone and you will hurt
and all the pain you feel will be ur fault cause you were led astray by that dirty flirt.

------- Author's Notes -------

anyone wh isn't being treated the way they want should move on. DONT ever let anyone control your life stand on your own 2 feet and be proud of what you are!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Kia (4.247.13.159) -- Wednesday, November 2 2005, 10:10 pm

My Prob

This is a very good poem. I liked it most because it sounds like the same experience that I had.... I think it's pretty cool to know that there's people out there that have had the same problem.
gemma_13 (86.1.148.24) -- Monday, January 16 2006, 02:59 pm

kia

thnx 4 ur comment i really appreciate any comments given on any of my poems and i no how u feel about wonderin if theres others out there feelin the same as you
 
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