Author: Danielle


You start to drink,and you start to talk
before you know it you can hardly walk.
You meet new girls and lots of guys
who just want to get between your thighs.
Things start to get hazy,and you start to get hot.
You dont know where you are,you suddenly forgot.
You were offered another drink and before you can think
your lying naked on the floor.
You try to get out but he locked the door
now you fell crushed,and you have to gasp for air.
He has one hand on your crotch and the other in your hair.
You scream and shout but no one can hear.
Your body begins to shake with fear.
Your quivering and shivering
you dont know what to do.
Who's this guy on top of you?
You dont have a clue
As the tears kepp pouring down your face
you feel like a slut and a disgrace.
He's taken away your dignity and all your pride
he's given you a past you always have to hide'
He's finally done
he staggers out the door
and your left lying naked,and col on the floor.


Comments on this poem/writing:

apologetic ( -- Sunday, April 4 2004, 12:29 am

so sorry

my sisters best friend in the whole world was raped, and she waited to late to say anything, im proud of u for finding a creative way to express yourself
Kaylee Thornock ( -- Friday, November 23 2007, 06:49 pm

I'm sorry.

I am so sorry that that happened to you. Both of my sisters had the same thing happen to them. I have had to help them get through that ever since it happened and we are still facing their challenges!! I am so so so sorry!!!
crystal ( -- Friday, August 8 2008, 09:09 pm

ive been there

hey girl, this sounds just like what happened to me when i was 12 he took my virginity an still to this day im upset i wish i could go back in time an change it all but i cant so i live with this in the back of my head but it made me who i am today STRONG
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