vinebar

All You
Author: Salad

vinebar

I think of you at night time
Before I go to sleep
And first thing in the morning
It's your face that I see
You treat me like heaven
My mom treats me like hell
But the only thing that I can do
Is deal with the cards im dealt
Sometimes I even wonder
How would it be if we
Consumed a child together
I could only dream......
I wish I could just leave her
And come straight home to you
But thing's happen for a reason
And the next step's up to you.

------- Author's Notes -------

Not much to say about this one, just my feeling's spilling out on paper.

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

Cindy (67.38.178.255) -- Saturday, November 12 2005, 05:27 am

Yumm

how do you cook your children before you consume them????

Consume: 1 eat or drink, 2 destroy, 3 preoccupy or possess, 4 use up.

Better to use the word "Have" or "Create"

Other than the incorrect use of that particular word the poem was good.
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Salad

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2018-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.