A Rose Upon My Pillow
15 November, 2005
Author: Terrie*
Your words
Delicate and sweet
Each one comes with it’s own embrace
So much meanin’ in what your heart choses to say
It's like a rose upon my pillow
That’s what you left for me today
Each word a praise
as i write of the love of my life
been there, done that
an, I know what you mean
I feel, what you say, kind of thing
a bouquet of beautiful roses
have I silently gathered
From each single rose placed upon my pillow
i found another one left by you today
a simple, thank you doesn't seem like quite enough to say
------- Author's Notes -------
inspired by a friend's comments ..this rose is 4 u |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| JF (80.6.51.13) -- Tuesday, November 15 2005, 02:33 pm Ah...the sign of a romantic interlude...inspiring. |
| Terrie* (69.19.207.53) -- Tuesday, November 15 2005, 05:25 pm so many comments are placed on my work and each time i recieve a praise, it places me up on a pedastol touchin' the clouds,a pleasurable feelin' like a rose was just placed upon my pillow .pleased that my work brought someone pleasure and their praise gives me that much more pleasure |
| Meridian (205.188.116.203) -- Tuesday, November 15 2005, 05:51 pm Speaking of roses, I can't believe these roses outside my house, are finally full blown. This was magical and enchanting. Like John Foster said, it is romantic---I can see a collection of your poetry placed in a romantic novel... It's so Shakespearen, Terrie! |
| Terrie* (66.81.136.52) -- Wednesday, November 16 2005, 05:12 pm Roses a symbol of LOVE & FRIENDSHIP, yes their delicate petals bloom so elegantly, i love Roses. ahhhhh makes my heart smile when i receive them whether as a comment or the real thing..glad ya like this , you , John and several others have given me many roses upon my pillow..now that is enchantin' and very magical...mmmm smell them roses upon my pillow ! thank you for your warm comment!! |
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