Dark Lone Streets by Taylor James

walking these dark lone streets
where anyone you can meet
standing alone with no friends of his own
in these dark and awful streets.

horror and pain with you i greet
waiting for the sacrifice to be complete
cut off it's head
and drink its blood

it'll make you pure
but send you to the ground with a thud

walking these dark and awful streets
where anyone you can meet.

wanting to fit in
but "normal" people calling it sin
what are you to do
after everything they've put you through?

take some hair from off their heads
put it on a doll
and stab their skull
for making you so weak.

walking these dark and awful streets
where anyone you can meet.

Mike (194.81.223.62) -- Friday, November 18 2005, 01:04 pm

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Scary and weird. I like it ;)

Taylor james (194.81.223.62) -- Friday, November 18 2005, 03:08 pm

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thanx for the comment mike, buit i have a question for you do you think that it belongs in the gothic catagory?and i thought you would like it

Mike (82.35.78.186) -- Monday, November 21 2005, 09:10 pm

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Either gothic, or hate perhaps..

Colin (69.157.11.140) -- Sunday, June 7 2009, 08:37 pm

if you are going to write 'dark thoughts'.....
if you are going to write 'dark thoughts' then make it 'black' and you certainly do that .....
.... if you going to write 'horror' then make it horrific! .... and you certainly do that - bravo to you for capturing them ... and the 'other' side of our mind!

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