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A Thousand Apologies
22 November, 2005
Author: Mike

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I'm sorry I don't give a sh*t,
I'm sorry I don't care.
I'm sorry that I hate you,
I'm sorry I'm never there.

I'm sorry I made you love me,
I'm sorry you made me cry.
I'm sorry I ever met you,
I'm sorry I want to die.

I'm sorry that I hurt you,
I'm sorry I caused you pain.
I'm sorry I've been a bastard,
I'm sorry that kiss was in vain.

I'm sorry that I did this,
I'm sorry I was a fool.
I'm just so very sorry
That I'm not sorry at all.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

taylor james (81.153.4.251) -- Tuesday, November 22 2005, 09:34 pm

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if this is who i think it is about then im sorry waht happend but u know that im always here for you ok
Mike (82.35.78.186) -- Tuesday, November 22 2005, 10:13 pm

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No, you don't know him..
Emma (86.1.48.222) -- Tuesday, November 22 2005, 11:04 pm

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I do like this, I can't explain why.. Cause I don't know. But uhh, yeah its good.
Mike (82.35.78.186) -- Wednesday, November 23 2005, 01:49 pm

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To fix my last comment, I didn't mean "him" as in someone special to me. This poem was for a lot of people, each line going out to a different person. I decided that it'd be best to get it all into one poem rather than split the poem into 5 or however many I felt I needed..

And Emma, thanks :) Love you :heart:
Emma (86.1.48.222) -- Friday, November 25 2005, 11:32 pm

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Am I there? If so, which line is for me?
Mike (82.35.78.186) -- Saturday, December 3 2005, 01:58 am

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Emma, the first two lines in the third and fourth stanzas are for you.. Don't ask me to explain though, please.
Yanny (88.110.246.245) -- Saturday, December 3 2005, 11:51 pm

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I don't know what to say, I can't really comment on poems cause i'm crap at writing them. But this is really good, i raelly like it a lot. in a strange way that even i don't know.
From a country whish DOES exist! (86.138.130.125) -- Thursday, December 8 2005, 10:52 pm

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As you wrote this for many...Out of curiosity, any line(s) for me? My guess would be first stanzas' first three lines...am I right ?Or is it worse xP? Third line of second stanza,then? Or is it all of the suggested? Heck if they are, I guess I don’t have a good affect on people then, do I? Intriguing poem...poses many questions, and yet presents answers which can only be guessed and wondered about.
 
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