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Goodbyes
7 December, 2005
Author: KitKatrina

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The vision of you standing before me,
Still resides inside my head,
Seeing your beautiful face,
But knowing that you’re dead,
I’ve dreamt so many times,
That I got to say goodbye to you,
In reality I did not say goodbye,
And now I’m lost without you,
One glimpse of your face,
Will make all my pain go away,
One word from your sweet lips,
Will make the memory forever stay,
Give me something to hold on to,
I need you but I don’t have that choice,
Let me hear your beautiful songs,
Sang with such a soft sincere voice,
Let it be known that you loved me,
That I meant the world to you,
You meant everything to me,
I just hope I meant that much too…

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Comments on this poem/writing:

tonya (216.160.237.225) -- Wednesday, December 7 2005, 06:34 am

speechless

That was amazing..just amazing. Dam near made me cry ....
Ing Twi Demalah (159.105.102.4) -- Saturday, December 10 2005, 01:48 am

I must admit..........

this nearly made me cry as well. Few poems are there that call capture such true emotion. Fewer still are the poems that can bring me to tears. This poem is beautiful, perfect in what it conveys, this will forever be one of my favorite poems, Thank you for sharing. Wonderful poem indeed.
KitKatrina (68.189.34.19) -- Monday, December 12 2005, 09:25 am

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Thank you for the comments, they truly do bring me joy when I read them. I'm just glad someone relates to the things I have gone through, and can feel what I have felt. Thanks guys, I really do appreciate it...
 
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