vinebar

That Piece Of Me
8 December, 2005
Author: Leah06

vinebar

I feel like half my heart is missing.
The half that is you.
So much has happened.
I have changed.
Things aren’t near the same.
Half of me is still missing.
I am one year older.
One year stronger.
And I have lasted one more year without you.
You have wondered on without me
Picking up others along the way
Leaving me behind
While you try to see if they are the one for you.
But none of them are.
You know who she is
How much you love her
And how you are not the same without her.
You get hurt each time you try another path
And only one is the right one.
I am right here
And I am waiting for you to realize
I am the right path.
Take my journey
I won’t ever break your heart
Or make you cry
And you will never regret.
Let’s start our own story,
Once upon a time
To very different people fell in love
And it is up to you
Will we get our happy ending?

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

Princess Moon (71.40.28.19) -- Tuesday, December 13 2005, 03:24 pm

Pretty GOOD!

I really like this poem Leah, it was absolutely brilliant and well written. I love love love love LOVE the way you ended it. Its like finishing the last touches on a painting, absolutely awesome! Great Job, Leah!
Ing Twi Demalah (159.105.102.8) -- Wednesday, December 28 2005, 11:21 pm

Amazing...

Such, power, such honesty, such longing and yearning, yet such devotion such LOVE. This is a majestic poem, full of power yet still so elegtant, amazing, simply amazing. A truly beautiful poem, Wonderful job.
Leah06 (67.160.237.11) -- Monday, March 6 2006, 06:56 am

thank you...

i still cant believe i wrote this. i dont remember writing this... alot has happened since then.... but thank you for reading and commenting.
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Leah06

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.