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Roller Coaster
Author: Tammy

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Up, and down
high, and low.
Where it lands
nobody knows.
In the air
on the ground.
You'll never know
it makes no sound.
Out of control,
or in a daze.
Racing thoughts
for many days.
Tears running
down your cheek.
This wild ride
makes you weak.
Flying fast down
the rail.
Riding into the
lowest hell.
Soaring back up
to the top.
This Roller Coaster
never stops.... (BIPOLAR)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben f (82.2.255.18) -- Thursday, December 29 2005, 05:28 pm

what a ride!!!!

how we all missed this I dont know!couldnt keep my eyes off,oh,what happened to the loop the loop?
great tammy,great!
Tammy (66.38.6.57) -- Friday, December 30 2005, 02:03 am

Ben f

Thank you so much for your comments on this poem, I am so glad you enjoyed the read.
 
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