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Love Gone Bad
Author: Catyrose

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Nauseous my stomach churns
My bowels erupt
Bile rises in my throat
I rush to the commode
Vomitting up little pieces of you
Larger pieces of me

Purging you from my heart
Throwing stones at you to release my pain
Dashing your heavy body against the rocks
Maiming your carcass again and again
Leaving a cadaver bereft of a soul for the vultures
To pick away at your remains
Allowing the waves to wash over you
Drowning you in my sorrow

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (151.199.136.89) -- Friday, May 11 2007, 04:32 am

gosh darnit Caty

This is some nice poetry right here! I love it.

Magnificient Saint Rose.
Catyrose (128.123.84.125) -- Friday, May 11 2007, 05:35 am

Hey Meri

This was the first poem I wrote on this site. Your the first person who was courageous enough to respond to it :) I was just a wee bit angry when I wrote this. Can't tell huh? Thanks so much for your comments. take care
Clive (65.102.101.19) -- Monday, May 19 2008, 12:46 am

Sounds Familiar

feeling this way hurts like hell,
feeling this way shouldn't be
have felt this way many time before
and yes now again

I enjoyed your poem thank you for sharing
 
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