Poetic Dreams - Other's Poems - With You - Still - by: Clive B Ringshall - submitted: 29 January 2006

When I breathe
And hold it for awhile
Do you feel my breath?
As I feel you inside

When I place my hands upon my heart
I feel your heart beating within mine,
When I feel your finger tips
My skin excites your every touch,

Every tear that falls from your heart
Each came directly from my eyes

You feel the pain
That I feel today; without you near
As for another night I must sleep alone
And wake up to no one there.

Terrie* (69.19.139.100) -- Sunday, January 29 2006, 01:39 am

so much passion in your heart
Clive i wish i could accept the credit but, i didn't do the Re-Write with you, so i caint , yet they were great ..

Catyrose (128.123.221.70) -- Monday, January 30 2006, 09:39 am

Powerful
Well, my friend. This one brings with it a flood of emotions.

Clive (71.37.156.96) -- Thursday, February 2 2006, 01:25 am

Your way too kind
This was a write about a year or so ago, found in the depths of my hard drive, so bought it to live another life

Terrie* (69.19.137.193) -- Thursday, February 2 2006, 01:54 am

Credit the rightful heart...and it is "Clive"
i agree they are a living legacy for all to read , in old and new writes alike .i'd love to take the credit,yet i have to sit on the side lines on these, if a scout were to seek permisson for release ,i have no claim ...to the re-writes

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