Moonlight Sonata
Author: Angel In Tears


In the midst of the blue,
The dream swirls like a cloud,
He dances in the wind,
And turns to white smokeÖ

Each note plummets to the ground,
With each heart string, the dream fusses
Into the darkness of the night.

Cold shivering chills run down his back,
While the dream twins, round and round.
Slowly creeping up the body,
With all the might,
Wraps around his neck.
The magic of life.

A breath of air,
Turns to
A puff of smoke.

In the midst of the red.
A cloud turns into grey gold.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Taylor James ( -- Tuesday, January 31 2006, 11:32 am


hey girl, i aint seen any of your poems in a while, cool poem dude keep writing and keep inspiring others
Meridian ( -- Thursday, February 2 2006, 03:12 pm

Behold the Angel!

The dream was over that quick? Darn. If only we could see more. It's a shame too, when I'm dreaming for awhile, and all of a sudden my dream goes no where but to a dead end. I try desperately to create a scene of my own while dreaming, but of course, that never works I just sleep angrily... Hahhaaha....

I enjoyed your poem Angel! Don't let that pen get rusty now!
Angel in Tears ( -- Saturday, February 4 2006, 11:10 am


Hi guys! Itís great to be back, and dust that pen has been getting rusty. I might just have to get a new one!Hahaha..Yes, dreams seem to just fly away when it's sooo lovely. And then again, you might dream nightmares. The same thing over and over, and you resist of sometimes falling asleep. Ever had that? Thank you both for the comments!
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