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Eternal Slumber
Author: Miztrebor

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Feelings surround,
My mind embraced.
Snakes surround,
My mind erased.
Hit the ground,
My body’s traced.
Police around,
My body’s placed.
The casket bound,
My time to rest.

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Anjali Thapa (202.161.146.51) -- Wednesday, February 1 2006, 01:44 pm

Brilliant

Great, simply great! The calibre to express so much in so few words is brilliant.
 
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