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The Second Effort
Author: David Soriano

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Super less spectacle -sent home Packing
Second effort
Reminiscent of Viking aura
But opposing Odin didn't show.

Gold heart, flaming red- symbolism of zeal and
Determination
Mindset attitude, the ground hit running through
"I" formation in a folded program

Show me state
Willpower
East-west navigation that day impossible
The arrowhead flying straight and true.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Felicia Edwards (205.188.209.12) -- Tuesday, November 5 2002, 02:33 am

This is very good.

I am a student at Bell Isle Interprise and I am looking for a poem on effort. And that has the authors name. you poem is very good.
 
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